1. The vikings subsisted from the 8th century to the 11th century.
''The terrific vikings bravely subsisted from the 8th to 11th century.''
2. Sweden didn't adopt feudalism.
''Huge Sweden didn't heartily adopt feudalism''.
3. Sweden was struck by the Blank Death in the 14th century.
''Cold Sweden was massively struck by the bad Black Death in the 14th century.''
4. Sweden was influenced by German merchants.''
''Innocent Sweden was strongly influenced by the skillful German merchants.''
5. Sweden united with Norway.
'' Strong Sweden sincerely united with weak Norway.''
6. The foundation of the Modern Sweden ocurred.
''The foundation of modern Sweden ocurred quickly.''
7. Sweden had the Protestant Reformation.
''Big Sweden had the great Protestant Reformation.''
8. Sweden emerged as a power.
''Anxious Sweden fastly emerged as a great power.''
9. Sweden fought in the Battle of Lutzen.
'' The armed Sweden fiercely fought in the complex Battle of Lutzen.''
10. Sweden destroyed 2000 castles, 18000 villages and 1500 towns in Germany.
''Fierceful Sweden violently destroyed 2000 paper castles, 18000 ant villages and 1500 lego towns in crowded Germany.''
11.Sweden became the 3rd largest country of the EU.
''Angry Sweden suddenly became the 3rd largest country in the great EU.''
12.Sweden's population increased.
'' Tenacious Sweden's cool population increased bruttaly.''
13.Sweden's agrarian economy changed.
''Universal Sweden's massive agrarian economy dramattically changed.''
14.Grassroots movements sprung up.
''Huge grassroots movements arrongantly sprung up.''
15.The Industrial Revolution progressed.
''The cheap Industrial Revolution changeably progressed.''
''The terrific vikings bravely subsisted from the 8th to 11th century.''
2. Sweden didn't adopt feudalism.
''Huge Sweden didn't heartily adopt feudalism''.
3. Sweden was struck by the Blank Death in the 14th century.
''Cold Sweden was massively struck by the bad Black Death in the 14th century.''
4. Sweden was influenced by German merchants.''
''Innocent Sweden was strongly influenced by the skillful German merchants.''
5. Sweden united with Norway.
'' Strong Sweden sincerely united with weak Norway.''
6. The foundation of the Modern Sweden ocurred.
''The foundation of modern Sweden ocurred quickly.''
7. Sweden had the Protestant Reformation.
''Big Sweden had the great Protestant Reformation.''
8. Sweden emerged as a power.
''Anxious Sweden fastly emerged as a great power.''
9. Sweden fought in the Battle of Lutzen.
'' The armed Sweden fiercely fought in the complex Battle of Lutzen.''
10. Sweden destroyed 2000 castles, 18000 villages and 1500 towns in Germany.
''Fierceful Sweden violently destroyed 2000 paper castles, 18000 ant villages and 1500 lego towns in crowded Germany.''
11.Sweden became the 3rd largest country of the EU.
''Angry Sweden suddenly became the 3rd largest country in the great EU.''
12.Sweden's population increased.
'' Tenacious Sweden's cool population increased bruttaly.''
13.Sweden's agrarian economy changed.
''Universal Sweden's massive agrarian economy dramattically changed.''
14.Grassroots movements sprung up.
''Huge grassroots movements arrongantly sprung up.''
15.The Industrial Revolution progressed.
''The cheap Industrial Revolution changeably progressed.''
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I liked your historical post. The way that you wrote the objective and subjective events is very neat!
ReplyDeleteGreat job Josue! Watch out for the word order of adverbs & verbs. If you are confused, this is a great link:
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Here are some suggestions:
.from ____ 8th century (add an article)
. adverbs come before verbs, so you should say "bravely subsisted"
. The huge Sweden (omit a word)
. verb/adverb word order
. It.. what is "it"? Don't use a pronoun to start.
. Blank (spelling)
. struck massively (word order)
. The innocent Sweden (omit a word)
. The strong Sweden (omit a word)
. united sincerely (word order)
. the weak Norway (omit a word)
. Occurred the foundation (word order)
. the Modern Sweden (omit a word and change capitalization)
. It... what is "it"?
. The anxious Sweden (omit a word)
. Fought in the (where is your subject?)
. fought fiercely (word order)
. Destroyed (where is your subject?)
. Destroyed violently (word order)
. the crowded Germany (omit a word)
. of the EU (change of to a different word)
. The angry Sweden (omit a word)
. became suddenly
. The population increased (where?)
. increased brutally (word order)
. Its agrarian (whose?)
. changed dramatically (word order)
. progressed changeably (word order)
I love the terrific Vikings! I wish my History teacher taught me the same way historic events. Thanks Proffesor! Now Swedish History doesn't have any secrets for me!
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